The first four lines really stood out. For many writers could relate. At different levels, but nonetheless, relate.

It was written with a real smoothness. It flowed. Allowing a solid depiction. Yet the meaning not so blatant that it is immediatly apparent.

I agree. Suburbs are better living than urban city overall. Yet people seem to have the need to front on here. I understand it, but it's still at times annoying/amusing/sad.

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