I thought at times you used stereotypes and cliches a bit too much. Looking at it with simplicity, at times of an outsider. But overall, it had that feeling of "looking through the eyes of one who sees 2d, but not always 3d"...and that innocence and bluntness made of it made it quite powerful.

the message was also put forward very strong. Though i felt the use of exclamation marks lessened the power and strength of it.

Overall a very good piece. Which was on the whole, felt.

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