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A superbly raw, on the edge style. Bringing forth the imagery and feelings of pain and anguish. Of virtual surrealism (heh).
And also a certain amount of complexity of mind-set. Of psyche. Of thoughts. Putting them in a very poetic and profound manner.
...though it has it's flaws. For the way it was written, it was damn good. And with each piece you write like this, it'll get better and better. Oh, and the certain imperfections are what make's the piece what it is.
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