like the topic. decent piece. to me this piece had such a melodious tone, seemed like something you tell around a campfire to scare others. simplistic, but it tells a story.

"YOU want to make a DEAL!
YOU bragged how unafraid YOU were, but now,
HOW DO YOU FEEL?"

best line. stood out because of the change in speech (3rd to 1st person)

good post.

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