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Old 08-18-03, 09:41 PM   #5
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expel or excel..they both sound good....lemme read again...

I'm sickened looking at this page, disgusted by these words
The generic way the letters form, no character in their curve

~this was good when you showed me and still remains~
~at its peak..nicely worded and real to be honest~
~we all go through dry spells~

Pushing the edge of whatever persona they claim to exemplify
Because through their dignity, my faults are someway amplified

~very good..many portray what they really arent and its~
~disguisting...jehovias witnesses...god is good bless you~
~and then they depict themselves before you over~
~their body flaws...'vices'...then assume theyre better~

I can’t expel individuality, being yourself through it all costs
I haven’t found my way out yet, but at least I know I’m lost...

~youll find your way girl lifes an eternal classroom for realz~
~and its not over you gotta long one ahead of ya~
~get that license!~

I may be wrong but this is what I got from your piece
and it was structured perfectly and written well..
shake the haters lurking sworving from afar...

peace
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