^ i believe u meant swerving anyway i didnt like this piece, as u sed urself u should be the last to complain and i feel like the acceptance of poems like this is almost a slap in the face for those of us who are daily grinding or working 9 to 5 etc to eat. To be honest the topic disgusted me but your skill shows. I dont know wut else to say i appreciate the poem as poetry but the topic saddens me that you cant be content at the top, 1luv.