so ur sayin this would be a multi: this aint over the beams of the rover, seems so much closer, the hit will leave you keeled over

The beams of the rover/seem so much closer...That works fine outloud and you have a very nice inner rhyme scheme going..BUT..seems so much closer/leave u keeled over....Isn't a multi..

Seems/leave....That can work alloud..But..so/you/..Don't work..keeled/much..Don't work...over/closer works..See ou have to make each multi you use rhyme..Like

Seems-so-much-closer when we-roll-hung-over, i need-no-luck-clovers ta beat-those-dumb-soldiers.

It doesn't really have a set content, i know..But that would be the correct way to multi off "Seems so much closer"

seems/we/need/beat...All work ...so/roll/no/those..All work...much/hung/luck/dumb..All work..closer/over/clovers/soldiers..All work...

I notice that they all do not rhyme perfectly..Thy are partially slant rhymes ..But once you incorporate the multi and say it out loud..It rhyme near flawlessly...

Understand a little better or do yall not really care? (lol)

Either way, i hope yall can grasp the feel of it a little more...

Stay up, 1ne..