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Old 08-18-03, 10:44 PM   #2
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Take ahold of my future and seize all I’ve been given//
To reminisce of my past would be a disgrace to living//


Word!


I’ll never be honest with the truth if the truth always lies//
How can living right be right when sin’s my strongest alibi?//


Preach it brother!


As long as reality is senseless, a new ambition always lingers//
And allow soul to flow as a whole; distinguish winners from sinners//

Didn't like the ending...


The other two i quoted i thought was right on point tho..You had a nice little piece here..Not to much of anything outstanding ..I think if you work a little more on originality and shock factor that it'd be in your best interest as an emcee..But overall it was a pretty solid drop..


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