Thread: ~Rain~
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Old 08-18-03, 11:03 PM   #5
Da NFamous
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Originally posted by Content
well written..ya never fell off...always got better forreal...
very descriptive..good imagery/vocab..thats poetry like v said..

“It was never meant to last, but never think you are alone, for one day you shall be reunited”

I push away consolation in return welcoming forth the bitterly cold fingers of remorseful regret

~you dig deep into yourself in a way I wish I could~

thats all..once again a great read and welcome back!

~true indeed~

The rhythmic calmness of your voice still echoes clear in my mind and I grasp it

~your just a good writer...I like the way you made this sound~

*cosigns* this piece was just like liquid soul i was really feeling it, too many people try to do a piece on rain and dont do it justice but this piece was sublime, kudos, 1luv.
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