To prove you sick with lines-
If you as ill as you claim then you ain’t fit to rhyme-


The multi there's perfect..Flow's right on point..But this is the only part i seen with a correct multi...

On a more positive note..


m iller then you…. with a group-
Of alcoholics getting drunk off my proof

That could have been SO sick....I don't think many have noticed or will notice the meaning to that but ...Pretty nice..A member from cunninglynguists has an idea similar to this but yu flipped it totally different..


it aint clear how you here- to much distorion-im on track like theories of motion-
fuck your girl for 8 months on the 9th make her Hurl as proof of abortion


Motion/destortion..Doesn't rhyme..Abortion/motion..Doesn't rhyme..But the last line made my stomach turn a little lol..So aside from the stretchyness off the line and lack of rhyme it was a good ending..

Your chorus?..Man, i was expecting more o be honest..It seemed quite mainstream and simple..


I like your work when you display the complexity you're capable of..How about we work with each other on a collab?..

Real topic, no "I'm the best" self praise type shit..PM me if you'd like to take me up on that offer..

Stay up, 1ne..