Not a bad piece, you handled the topic nicely, flow could of been a little better in West's verse because he went for the more emotional / imageric side and his flow was a little hard to catch, Rhythmic came off slightly better, his verse opened it up nicely, good flow, nice imagery, good word chocice and the writers voiuce element shone through in this.

Nice coolab guys, reply to my piece: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73796