Yeah, it flowed pretty nicely - would sound doper as an audio, i agree about the M.O.P style, thats the aura i got off it as i read it too, goood flow, lyrically it was decent, too many kids are rhyming about the "ganksta" type raps now, its getting kinda old, so maybe next time pick a better topic - something original that hasnt been done yet. Not bad for a quick keystyle though, it made for an ok read.
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