Yeah, you fell off the beat in certain parts, and re-used the same rhyming words over and over, but i realise this was a parody and only done for kicks so i wont criticise it too hard, flow was pretty nice although it slipped at times, vocab wasnt too basic, stuck to the topic of kiiling, i liked the intro section. Just try keeping it to the beat a little more next time i guess.

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