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Old 08-19-03, 12:09 PM   #2
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Nice collab guys, stuck to the topic nicely - it was real original, and both brought up some good points, i liked Keys flow slightly more, the multi's and internals in his verse helped keep the flow to his verse, i liked this section:
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Why should i work today for no pay,catching whippings,
KKK becoming racial with a new beginning,
These next couple words are important, i'm not down,
But heavy is the head upon which lays the crown

^ Crown line was nicely worded, good flow, stuck with his opint and put it acroiss to the reader nicely. Overall not a bad collab, Props.

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