here's a favour, I'll give you your first reply... not bad... I mean, the flow lacked, but it could just be how I was reading it.. space out the lines nore, easier to read... this was a really long collab tho, so I can see why you did it that way.... WORD'z got a better pop to his bars, an' follows tha story better.. mic, u had some nice lines I gotta give u that, your wordplay needs improvement.. an' tha's about it... 1....

and btw... i don't get so calky 'cause I think I'm "Mr.Hip-Hop" as you so blatently put it... my calkyness is just my way of pushing people to get better... so when I'm rude or seem like I'm hating I'm not, just giving that extra little push...

reply to one of my pieces, either in open mic.. or one of the audio's in my sig... 1

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