you do need alot of improvement man, up your vocab... and stay away from thug rap, 'cause you're not a thug.. you live in newbrunswic... come on.. I know newbrunswic isn't even close to gangsta like the population of the whole province is pro'lly 2 million... lol... so yea, advice... VOCAB, WORD-PLAY, FLOW... flow is a simple 4-4 beat for any beat... listen to the snare... and write to that, forget the melody even exists.. if you learn how to catch the snare then work on writing to the melody aswell..

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