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Old 08-19-03, 07:30 PM   #9
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Soldier

This fool RE registered thinkin' he'd get points for clever word play..
The best things in life are free? Then what do we owe for reading your verse, 'Aye?/
okay personal.. not very tho

Thinkin' he sicker now, its like wurdz can't come out once i hit his mouth....
This nigga clowns, you wouldn't be on a .. winnin' Regime.. if u hacked.. um lets say.. Chrits Account! .. haha/
Good Personal.. Good Line

Wurdz's beginning was bleek; Since you lost strip poker you havent had a ....winning streak...
Sorry! Battling wacks is not right, n last time he ... dropped nice... he had attitude counsellors listening as he begined to speak!/
Sum Good Wordplay.. The Rest Fell

Soldier Advance And Attack, Give Wordz No Chance To React To Enhance And ComeBack, I Put A Trance On This Cat And Crush This Wanabe Herb Like Fake Plants Gettin Smashed!...
Good Flow.. Really No Good Punch Tho

No Respect Given', Il Staple His Vocal Chords To His Lungz Until He Holds His Breath To Them, No Interlect In Him, My Lines Punch Out His Back Teeth ..So...No, His Wordz Dont Posses Wisdom!..../
Good Wordplay.. Nice Punch

Old Vet? Nah Nothin's Left To Fight, But He Still Makes Dent In,e, Opponents... He's Repped To Bite! His Wisdom Wrecked By Might, I Spit & Murder Words... Like Death And Die../
Ehh okay

He's Banned And Even His New Rep. Is Doomed N He Mad, N After Years Of Spittin 1st This Fool Still Booming To Brag, I Subtract Health... You Now Showin Less Sign Of Life Then Funeral Ads..../
Good Punch.. Nice Finisher

Metas - 6/10
Flow - 6/10
Wordplay - 8/10
Punches - 8/10
Personals - 9/10

Total - 37/50

Overall - Naht Bad.. I've Seen Better.. but shit naht bad..If tha flow went wit harder hitting punches.. it would have upped your score.. personals really kicked in too play here.. The Wordplay worked in this battle.. good job

WurdzOfWizdom

call me a soldier two,so this battles even,well post verses in camo
ur swingin blanks,like test rounds at stations,ur emty with ammo
Ehh.. Basic Punch

just cuz u got 1000 posts dont make u a vet,ur still a newb and its not cuz im older
make way for d/r,everyone knows hear comes groupies when they see posts by soldier
Flowed Well Here.. Nice Punch/Personal

he needs to know that wack rhymes,cauz wacknes and will be producing his loss
not even masterbating with a crusifc will help save him,thats just missusing the cross
Failed Attept at the Wordplay.. but not too bad

he only beats newbs,so i presume hes never beatin a vet
call me hungry for wackness,so i guess ill be eating his text
Decent Punch

u couldnt toss sickness,if u threw test tubes with aids
so ur retireing,but u couldnt finish in a blast if u stood next to granades
Wordplay Wurked.. Nice Punch

u wouldnt need to retire,id bann u,if this battle was for ur slip
like hiv infectants,u could at least retire then,knowing ur sick
Decent Punch.. second line is quite played tho

ill pull his verse out his ass,so try not to faint kid
n put his bouws under vizion to prove that he aint shit
Coulda Been Better.. A lil on the weak side

Metas - 7/10
Flow - 6/10
Wordplay - 8/10
Punches - 9/10
Personals - 8/10

Total - 38/50

Overall - Good Hard-Hitting Punches helped you in this.. the wordplay wurked in most occasions.. and was nicer than that of the wordplay i seen in soldiers.. the personals were okay.. good battle none the less

THA VOTE

Soldier Shined in personals.. he had a lot of dirt on wurdz that he used to his advantage.. slowed a bit on the wordplay.. with off flow that didn't go well with his punches.. Wurdz took the punches category.. This Is where wurdz took tha cake.. He had sum good creativity.. So by a slight vote.. Wurdz gets my vote.. No hate

Vote - WurdzofWizdom