The way you set it out gave it an at times psychedelic feel. But not quite total, as it seems slightly more centred.

The way you linked it up with such depth gave it that extra haunting effect of wise psychedelia (dunno if that's an actual word). Someone who is in his thoughts with such contemplation.

Er, dunno what else to say. For some reason, i can't think of anything else to say on the piece. It was interesting and put together intelligently. I would be intrigued to hear it in song form (actual audio).

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