Thread: literrary proof
View Single Post
Old 08-20-03, 01:15 AM   #8
LikeWise
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

I would give a more indepth reply but i don't feel as if you spent much time on this because it has no set topic for me to notice..I'd really like to see you go on a realistic topic instead of just battle lyrics..I seen a few lines in there that was eye catching tho so don't feel discouraged..


nothing else would compute your brain waves would slip-
from my compact disc-
loaded to your minds hardrive my virus shutdowns you memory chip-

The computer anaoligies used here i found creative..Nice set of lines i think..


use my name in rhymes tatttooed to my spine so atleast i represent being misunderstood

That's so stretched man..But the concept dealing from "KNOW CENTS" is dope...

More advanced then minor idiot technology-
fools who merge binary tools and astronomy-
convincen their convictions god is mythology-
dumbassess that don’t realize the meaning of philosophy-


That was good as well..Nice content..Some parts had little or no meaning to me but as a whole it fit well..

That's really all i felt was worth quoting..I find it hard to give positive feedback to mixed pieces..Meaning it's battle rap with a deeper outlook but none the less a battle rap..So as far as elevation i can't tell you Anything that i havn't already..

Keep it up tho..Elevation is present..

1ne
  Reply With Quote