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IP:
despite the title....
(<--- FEMALE)
this was a decent drop, mainly because it was emotions speaking. Personally, the vocab was at times redundant, but it didn't have to be structurally correct since it was venting pent up feelings. I find it witty and clever the way you phrased some of the things you said. keep at it.
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"life is a game, you have to choose a side to play
if i gotta pick a position, i'mma pick missionary."
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