Thread: Bitches pt.1
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Old 08-20-03, 01:26 AM   #6
Jes
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despite the title....
(<--- FEMALE)

this was a decent drop, mainly because it was emotions speaking. Personally, the vocab was at times redundant, but it didn't have to be structurally correct since it was venting pent up feelings. I find it witty and clever the way you phrased some of the things you said. keep at it.
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