heres my 2 cents, take it how you want

i generally liked it but im a stickler for staying on topic. I liked the computer anaolgies, then i LOVED the section about getting respect (i think thats what you were trying to say). after that it was still good but like i said, i need consitency in a theme. dont get me wrong, this is 20x better than what i can do but just saying, pick a topic and stick to it. other than that it was real good