Rhyming/Flow
Keys, You Flow Was Dope... One or Two Parts However Cracks Were Showing But It was Still Cool... Butters, I felt Your Flow Was Weak, Myabe It Was Just me, But It Was Choppy In Alot Of Places...5/10

Vocab/Wordplay
You Both used A Glittering Array Of Voacb To really Express The Real Emotion Through Here, Butters Especially, Lines Like : "stuck in a world with grand wizards and neo-nazis"
and raped the free world's women
and called the free world's man sadistic savages" - Were Not Just Powerful But held A Deep meaningful Expression Of Hatred, n' Superiority.

Keys, You had Some Mad LInes As Well, i.e:
"Martin and Malcolm, many others in the painful struggle,", Again bring The Historical Factor Into It, The Suffering The Felt etc..etc... 9/10

Concept/Topic
I Could Say The Topic Is Slightly PLayed Out, But You Both Put Your Own View Across Which Created It's Effective Originality. DEfiently Deep n' Emotional, Alot Of Mixed Feeling's, Anger, hatred, sadness etc...8/10

Overall
8/10 A Great Read, You Both Exzelled In Differant Aspects Of The pIece, Keys In Flow, BUtters In Meaning. Could'nt Pick between You, Only Thing I Can Say Bad About It is Butters Flow, Work On It dawg, But I got A more Poetic Sense Of Flow, Than Rappin' To A beat...


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