Just Like Me n’ You, But His Actions Are Repeated By Yet So Few...
It’s Just Like Adam n’ Eve, Messing Up Mankind’s Debut...
^^nice lines rythmic

A Sin So Awful, Mentally Horrendous n’ Impure...
No Thought For What The Innocent Family, Had To Endure...
5 Shots, Killing 3 Instantly, A 6th Just To Make Entirely Sure...

also some good lines^

That Night, Tom Disgraced n’ Punsihed, Shot Himself...
God Ordered Him To leave His “Garden”, Send Him To Hell...
This Is The Beginning Of The End, For Tom - A Satanist Farewell...
^^good ending

This was overall a nice powerful piece. It explicitly explains the power of Original sin, and how it still affects us. Good use of the cause and effect concept. Overall a nice piece, well thought out and everything, some really good shit.

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