lol At us POsting 2 SS Pieces On Open Mic At the Same Time.

Rhyming/Flow
Flow Was Dope Dawg, Sailed Smoothly Throught, No Cracks Or DEnts In It At All, LIked The Innerline Rhyming, nice...8/1-

Vocab/Wordplay
You had Dope Vocab here, "I attempt to get closer, life is full of wonderful occurences
Regeneration of wonder brought by certain recurrences" - Thats One Of My favourite Bars, BUt Overall You Had A Good Complex, Knowledgably Vocab, Which Really Showed Through Here....7/10

Concept/Topic
You Were Givin' A Topic, And You PLayed It Out nicely. Expressing Several Differant Aspects: I'm scared but I still want to get closer to my goal - Fearful
I can't stay locked up in this room until old - Withdrawn...
..Nice...8/10

Overall
8/10, Was A Good Piece, I'm INterested To Know How Far It'll get In Sacred Scriptures, BUt In My Opinon, It's A Dope Joint..

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