WELL OKAY
I WLL GET INDEPT

this story is lost, so not just the dumb are askin'..
what is the plot?, and what is gonna happen?..

GREAT INTRO LINE THE THOUGHT PROCESS OF WRITTERS BLOCK AND THE FIRST QUESTION WHEN YOU WRITE A TRACK THATS ASKED.

THE OPEN MICS LINE WAS PERFECTLY USED AND BY FAR ONE OF MY FAVORITES ON THIS BOARD

Edge of seat becomes Rule of Thumb as we Pen Duel some
and living honest is bleeding promise of what you've become,

WONDERFUL WORDPLAY THERE AND CONCEPT WAS DELIVERED EXACT

what ur facing is losing, the crowd applaudes & its blatant
Its Now Curtains for me, im a dying man, but i had u hangin.

TIGHT BUT I LOST THE RHYME SCHEME HERE THOUGH

OVER ALL 8/10 RATING