Vote=Envy
Nice flow, kida strecthed his bars but it went together like eminem, Nice punches and similes and with sum multies
good shit Enve
other kid, ya flow is kinda choppy, dont make yo lines so off, like dont make oone sentence long, then the other way shorter cuz it throws it off ya know, try to even this out, ya got potential dog
anyway can ya'll hit this up in return for this feedback, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=1