Vote=Envy

Nice flow, kida strecthed his bars but it went together like eminem, Nice punches and similes and with sum multies
good shit Enve

other kid, ya flow is kinda choppy, dont make yo lines so off, like dont make oone sentence long, then the other way shorter cuz it throws it off ya know, try to even this out, ya got potential dog

anyway can ya'll hit this up in return for this feedback, thanks

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