Thread: Distress Call (Need feedback PLZ)
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Old 08-20-03, 04:10 PM   #3
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Re: Distress Call (Need feedback PLZ)
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Originally posted by ~*sPiTTeNgUrl*~
Distress Call

Her name in a dictionary
Because her life is so 'defined'


Distress Call

^^that was word-play lol, good job hun, need to elevate a bit, work on the flow, but otherwise keep it up, you'll get up there...
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