Tampons are expensive
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Shiznit's Thoughts:
The whole idea of this piece is quite simple. The emotions youve kept inside responded and reflected over to what u have written.
Quite a short piece but once in awhile venting can be good. Well a good idea for this is rewrite. Take all of what u have and add a couple of interesting facts that would make it all even and you'll see how it would be better..not that this is not good. Its just that it would be better if youve artistically execute it.
nicely done.
Check out Rhetorical Insights. Explore one picture and write something about it. Quite simple. Drop some in there. Thanks
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