I like how when I read this I read each sentence without a breath, almost so that when i hit a fullstop I had to gasp for air. It made me feel it more, made me feel the desperation, synonymous with running out of air, like Im drowning in the thoughts fleeting through my mind, struggling to keep up.
Once taking a breath to relieve the pressure Id jump right back into the next sentence and on the story would go...
Not sure you intended it this way as it is a vent and maybe not purposely constructed this way, but it did add to the experience.
I dont know if this relates to just one personal experience, I kind of get the feeling it relates to life more so, to a range of emotional incentives you've experienced..
Interesting piece, Regards~

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