yo Focus'd you KILLED this cat:

"A lyricist since you was a new-birthed livin cell/
Ill place you in a livin hell when my bars transform from words ta steele,vertically assemblin around you,lock you down in my rhythms prison cell/ "

That ALONE took this... but the flow, punches, vocab, all much more intelligent, well-written.....I might just have to battle you myself soon...

vote = Focus'd

yo both of ya hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74241