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i LOVED the last line mad man put in there..because in the end its so true
Bribes was also really good although it lacked that special thing that mad man did
mad man made the topic work for him rather than bribes whoworked on the topic...which i do so im not degrading it
but all in all it was down to a few lines mad man put in
And Justin grew an extra bone, right in front of everyones eyes
She got the receipt for the hotel, and called to know of the next reservation
Slow and methodical was her plan, she had all the time and patience
When asked why she had done it, she said, "Because he couldn't get himSELF HELP <<< that bit was smoothly added in i liked it
Their is no fury like a womens scorn < too true
the other thing that went for mad man was that he said it was a keystyle.sersiouly man if this is what your keystyle are like a wouldnt mind seeing a polished version
Vote= MM
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