^don't people get banned for crap like that?

I thought the peice was simple but it was mainly emotional. And like you said you needed to get it out, which is understandable. This was really personal I thought... some times that can make it hard for the reader to understand completely, but I think you did a pretty good job not loosing me... It's probably something people would appreciate more on a meaningful level verses a poetic one. But the emotion is there in it... I like it, like you said it could have been writtin a little bit better, but overall it wasn't bad. Keep elevatin, Peace