"sentiments exactly' maybe profitts my twin..or im his....

'the love that he had was yours'
'the love tha has will always be yours'
im unsure of the view...third person...as if
your writing this from a therapists position?!?!

your first stanza definately had me going like you
were 'in the zone' and the you switched it and kept
it nice as well..assorted flavors...strange fruit...always good

your second stanza flowed well and possibly digged deep
into yourself to remember 'whats really good' back then

your third verse was actually you speaking back at the
'therapist' on a defensive note explaining wha youve
been through and what your current status is...

your last stanza summed up what you put at the end
of each stanza for a signficant reason...which was done
a lot diferently than most..your in your own world girl so
dont change...hopefully you find what you're searching for

the imagery was good in the first and fourth stanzas
and your real emotion flowed in you second and third

well done

la paz