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Old 08-22-03, 03:46 AM   #9
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From: Hayes, VA aka Haze-where its hard ta see
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at first i was gonna give this one to bribe, but afta readin it a second time, mad man edged it out with spefication, this was an aight battle, expected ta see betta

bribe- rhyme scheme: 6, flow: 6, story: 7, total: 19

mad man- rhyme scheme: 6, flow: 5, story: 9, total: 20

bribe generalized more, mad was more specific actually gettin you hooked to his verse/ story, vote- mad man by a slim margin, peace, 1

peep my ish
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