I'm sorry it took so long to respond, I was busy retrieving my jaw from the floor. How to put it; you put into words something that is wonderous and beautiful and you didn't cheapen it. In fact you made it a little more interesting because you described it so delicately. Basically the topic was off the hook because your style made it that way. As far as the flow and vocabulary..................

passionate rage, bringing our carnal tendencies to surface
with intent and purpose, his touch speaks verses
left speechless, my vocal gestures deemed worthless

superb inter bar rhyming and when you speak it out loud it rolls of the toungue in glorious fashion. Very seldom do you hear multi's in poetry but I think this is the closest I have ever seen.
In closing this IS ART one of the best pieces I've seen in a long while. 1

p.s. sorry I had to quote these lines............................................. ...

-mentally realizing, the beauty in which I wallow in my gitty serenity
savoring the pleasure of the moments pass from end to upon entry