Rhyming/Flow
Both Your Flows Were Silky Smooth, You Had No Choppy Bars In There Whatsoever, Props for That.
Surreal Exzelled With His Innteral Rhyming, You Made Good Use Of This To Keep It Upbeat n' Goin': "For Now My Life Is Shaken, My Heart Is Over-Taken..
No More Love, No More Friendship, For You Are Forsaken.." - That Was Nice There.

Skiznit:, Your Flow Was A Little Weaker In Some Points, However It Was Still Tight, But You COuld've Used Some INternals, But As I said, It was Good... 8/10

Vocab/Wordplay
You Both Used Some Mad Vocab In here, Y'all Used Expressive, Deep, Warm full, Phrases n' Words To Really Touch Us With What You Were Tryin' To Get Across. Two Past LOvers, Moving On In The World/ I Think The Whole Piece Was Summed Up Expertly But Shiznit With Her Line: "Time would heal every wound. I have to move on.".....9/10

Concept/Topic
You Right About His Topic Been A Bit PLayed OUt, But When You Can Relate To It In Your Own Way, And Say The Things That You Feel, Then Who cares If It's Been Used Before, Y'all CReated It To Your Liking And You Life..Big props..9/10

Overall
9/10, We Should See More Of The "heavyweights" If You Will, Coming Together More, Cos As We can See FRom THis piece, It Certainly Pays Off, You Both Had Straight A+ Verses, Hope Too See More Things LIke This In Future..

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