not bad for a newb riva, but fundamentals took this one
heres the breakdown
wordplay=fund
vocab=fund
creativity=neither
metas=fund
punches=fund but it waas close in my opinion
flow=riva, fundamentals lines were too strecthed to keep a consistent flow

overall vote=fundamentals

no hate, no beef just honest vote

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