good drops from both

T- had a better perspective the way his story was told made it slghtly more interesting
was't really outstanding....didnt have enough imagery and word play imo

Pledge..u surprised me with a solid verse here (lentgh meant i was getting a bit bored halfway thru)
but what won it was your imagery and u seemed to have spent alot of effort on it and also some nice wordplay

'when you look in the mirror your smiles reflected by the pane '

'so stone cold that when you weep you cry solid ice tears
they cut into your soul and clip your agels wing you need