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Old 08-22-03, 05:09 PM   #11
Aisle Phive
AKA Cereal Shelf
 
Posts: 1,852
From: New Jersey
IP:

this was a good newbie battle, but i think superman had this one, dialect u came good but most of your verse was a filler, u need to come harder with punches, superman had a few good punches but you guys need tyo elevate, props to both of yall.

hit this up with an honest vote...
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