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IP:
lets go bar by bar first
G's first
Amend sweats Quo. . For the record, I condoned his gay life
But for now, I'm occupying this toddler til he's owned by Jae Cyph
^^good opener wordplay personals bangin 8
In the zone he stays tight, he's burnt. . Afraid, I tanned this fan
Stick to the 2-3, or press. . Cause you're slayed in man-to-man
^^sickness tha basket reference was on point lol 9
Nice avy, poser. . Ekko? This bitch can't fend off classics
Stick to Fashion Bug. . At least then you'd fit the demographic
^^good punch but demographic? too wordy 6
A legitimate win over AxL? Christ, Amend kicks consistent lies
I'll put you out of your misery, yeller. . And click, "Submit Reply
^^lol yeller nice punch wit personal 7
But I'm not finished! I'd use feet, but my fists'll stomp this "vet"
Brookyln? What a noob. . Amend still lists accomplishments?
^^another legit personal 7
I'm too subdued for you. . This loser assumed that he breached hate
Three locations? He forgot to mention he was booed out of each state
^^^lol first line was dumb but tha second was great 8
I'd say he had a chance. . But then, I'd have to stop and delete mine
Every punch he's done is played. . 10 bucks says he drops a "De-Feet" line
Fuck this kid, no remorse; All filler, you must agree and should mix punch
He disappears after every loss. . So, my friend, I'll see you in six months
^^2 bars one shot only personal in tha last bar lol mix punch ok finisher id say 6 for tha first bar and a solid 8 for tha last
total 68
AMEND...
Bin Ladin Freak!, Muhammed's Weak - I'll Give Ya Lyric-Ali's Disease
Probably Be, Abolished See - Cause Jihad's To Peace In Theology's
^^good opener dont really like ur selective word style but ima look past that and go for content 6 cuz...ali lines played no matter how much u switch it
Quality,To Me U Lack - Generic Knock-Offs Never Leave The Rack
I Cant Believe This Cat - An RB Vet, But At Rhyme N Reason's WAK
^^more of a diss towards RB but oh well..nota well thought out punch 5
Leave G. In Stacks, Your Still Nonsense - Stop Grabbin My Pockets
Got The Upper Reach, Kuz I Keep Won's In The Back Of My Wallet
^^illness wordplay was sick 9
Unless Strapped To A Rocket, This Match Is Mine - So Go Get A Life
Fuckin Shadow, Which One Do U Want To Be With - SLiK Or Cyph
^^uh strapped to a rocket? lol made up for it in ur second line 7
Dickless Dyke, You Wont Score - Until After Your Leaving This World
Got A Muslim Fetish - So When He Dies, He Can Finally Be With A Girl
^^lol 9
G.s Unfurled, Like I Gave Him A Whirl - Muhammed Atta's Your Idol?
No Wonder Your On A 'Crash Course', Tryin To Evolve To Ya 'Title'?
^^personals 8
Droppin This Rival, Be-Friending Ya Verse - We Can Kick It Together
If U Cant Beat Em, Join Em - And My Word-Perfect Addition Is Never
^^^......................sorry i didnt get it sounded like u gave in and sed hey no hard feelings lol 6
total 50
cant go by points cuz AMEND's verse was shorter..seemed as if amend had tha harder personals but Ghod had tha punches and wordplay...flo def goes to AMEND ...creativty mmm tie but as far as from head to toe top of verse to bottom GHOD gets this AMEND seemed to have fell off in his closer like he was tryin to make amends or somethin lol sick battle though
vote GHOD
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