I placed my hands upon your shoulders your waist
Said good morning fealt a kiss then it all went blank,
Your damn straight I was feenin for that butterscotch taste
To kiss you where bikinis barely miss you amazed*,


Niiiiiiiiiiccccccccccceeeeeeeee lines right here dawg. Overall I liked it the flow was kinda off and then i read it as if twista was flowing and it fit. The poem was off center and it made it a more interesting read.
Upon a 'blue' carpet but im 'happy' though no 'sad' times
With you makin me think about children someday
Wishin that I had mine with you.....
Like the late great Aaliyah girl your one in a million--that is wordplay and not that played bullshit recycled and changed to sound new its original and witty. But these so called freestylers wouldn't understand it, too much intelligence for them I guess.
I'd be honored to collab with you. But what happened to the PT collab?