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a perfect imperfection...
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IP:
to be completely honest.....heres how i see it.
Iceburg- your spit was alright, i guess. Some really basic stuff though...like this:
Smack-him..... Sum1 Please!! This stupid bitch gettin on my nerves/5
U Worst then them little whiny ass "Win-Hungary" Motha Fuckin HERBS!/6
that second part was just a streched out insult....doesnt really flow well and weakens the overall punch. Overall, u needed more complexity and some length in ur rhymes.
GChand- your verse was alright as well. But heres what separated it from Iceburgs: the better punches and one personal. While some lines were played, it was better than Iceburgs....your beginning and ending line were strong.
Vote - GChand, by a small margin. If I was you Iceburg, i would ask for a rematch....ive seen you do better than this. peace......
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