I got a genius idea for us to collab on!!!! MMk I'll talk to you about that later, jus remind me cause I'm forgetful. To the peice: (sounded like to the batcave)
You could tell it was older, it doesn't seem to be the style I'm used to reading from you. Though it is a nice, very depictive peice... I can understand missing some one, missing their touch. And it shows that you did care about her because the little things you missed were very true to a deeper relationship. My fav line was the one about kissing where bikini's miss... jus somethin about it, maybe it's that it was left to the reader's imagination and that was why it stood out to me, but I read that part several times over. Loved the peice, liked seeing how you used to write in comparison to your current style. Makes me feel like their's hope yet that I may some day be on your level. Haha, likin the peice, and I wouldn't mind readin some more of your older stuff as well. Peace buuuuuuuddy