beat is ok....your voice delivery was kinda low, i dunno if you did that on purpose or not.....but did you.....cuz i noticed you picked up the volume of your voice as you went rhymin on....concept of the song is kool.....flow is good, lyrics were ok, hook is type good.....second verse was hot...feelin it more then the first one....i think you should finish it if you havent yet...keep doin your thing and stay up.....OnE






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