Aight,

Baron:You Had A KIlla Flow Dawg, One Of The Best...Your Content Was Ill, Not GOin' Of The TOpic, Not Playing It Out Too Much, Loved Bars Like: "Hoping Kids will Be Drawn In By Its Abundence As The Sun Sets
Another Reader. Another Victim In A Story That Hasnt Begun Yet" - nice..
Flow:9/10 Content:9/10 Vocab/wordplay:9/10 Overall:9/10

Fgee:You Had more Of The Stroy Telling Sort of Thing GOin ON, YOu FLow Was Good, BUt Was A Little Weak in Some PLaces. Your Content Was NIce, It Was A Good Read, Kept Me Inticed In It All The Way Through.
Flow:7/10 Content:8/10 Vocab/wordplay:9/10 Overall:8/10

Vote:Baron Mynd