This was a nice piece.
Fave line :

Because I still dance in the palm of your magnificent hand
You've removed the spell, but I'm still under your comand

You're right when you say that you the first 2 stanzas were different than the other two, but yet again it didn't really bother me. It was a piece that kept my interest throughout reading it, which makes it a nice read.
To the end your poem became more basic, so maybe you could elevate on that? No hard feelings intended.
Keep dropping baby girl, I'd love seeing something new from ya

peace