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Originally posted by rap guerilla
my lyrics pierce u like samuri swords/
Erm weak...
I leave you deceased like dem iraqi boys/
l.m.s. shoot big guns not baby toys/
Good boy, damn thats weak line
you aint got a chance of beatin me /
useless filler
i dont even no why u acept da beef/
big dog round here u should call me chief/
Meta's don meen u can lie....''big dog here....another weak line
pretty son il be rhymin elite/
im hot out here just like elliot ness/
Erm....man this was weak to
comin at me betta bring ya best/
talk real slick get da shoddy to ya chest
well you tryed somthin here.....
Well this was a wack verse......you lacked everthing concept, didnt punch you tryed to was way to basic.....and it had a bet kinda flow
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Look Kid, Stop Praising Youself, To Be Honest...You Suck
Didnt See A Punchline, How U Gonna Win You Dumb Ass Fuck
LOL, nice feedin....punch
Why Do I Need To Come Hard Wen I Have No Competition
Damn Kid, I Guess You Accepted My Callout For The Recognition
nice flow...ok line
Spit Wit Incision, Lyricaly Disectin Ya Mind So Your Lost For Words
How You Gonna Elevate Wen Your Rhymes Wont Allow Forwords
Nice vocab...ok punch
I'll Split Both Ya Eyes So You Can 'Four' See This Victory
Rap Guerilla, Who Are You? You Dont Mean Shit To Me
was ok line
Well Its Been Fun, I Killed You In With Half The Time
You Cats Have Nine Lives, But I Gave You 10 Life'Lines'
nice finish
Better verse than that gorrilla....one sided battle, end took this by better punches,flow,vocab......better overall vote=End