Thread: The Aftermath
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Old 08-23-03, 07:45 PM   #5
RythmicTendicies
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Ace: WTF Was That!

Rhyming/Flow
Your Flow here Was Sick, It Was Suprisingly Smooth, Your Bars Were The Same Length Preety Much Throughout Which Really Helps "pan It Out", Nice....8/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Was Lackin' A Bit On The Vocab. You Had NIce Metas Though, And Good Wordplay..Work On Your Overall Vocab Though...6/10

Concept/Topic
You Rapped About Alotta Good Relevant Things here, MOstly To Do With Rb. Bars Like: "Maybe I’m a sore-loser who sobs or a producer who’s a snob//
Or a victim who was bashed caused by the aftermath of a blowjob//"


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"I’m probably this board’s biggest threat, when I rap, I’m hot//
I bring these niggas hell but if all else fails, I can always take up pop//"
- Were nice, Good Self Glorification There..8/10

Overall
7/10, It Was A Good Freestyle, Flow Was Sick, But Work ON Your Vocab A little More..

Word!
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