Straight Savage.
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Baron:You had a good drop.Flow and vocabulary was good here and everything. I liked the concept, and boy, I wish I could show that to my parents. Then I wouldn't read anymore. Good piece, loved the content.8.5/10
Fgee:Wow this piece was freakin suspenseful.After the first verse was done I thought it ended there, but it didn't Good work, I did not expect a piece like this at all. Now it just makes the whole voting part harder.8.5/10
Now this is the hard part of my job.
I enjoyed reading both stories to the fullest, but Fgee had more of a story tone to it, which kept me alot more interested. But the only problem with the verse was that the flow was a lttle off in some places, while Baron had his flow consistent at all times.This is the toughest vote i ever made, but I'm givin it to Fgee. Both pieces were hot, but I was feelin Fgee's story more.
Vote-Fgee.
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