G. Hod - I think that you're personal punchlines were pretty nice, because this battle was basically based upon such aspect. I also believe that you focused on more just what happened with your opponent (AMEND) then throw some random shots that wouldn't even relate to him what so ever in the first place. That's what attracted me to your battle verse even more, because it showed me creativity/originality within your battle verse and of course, that's always good. The multis were decent, could've been much better, but some bars had them, as some only had not even one extra rhyme to add to the strength of the scheme in the flow. The structured format in this battle verse of yours was quite good, actually.. At the end, you begun slippin' up and letting bars go longer than others, but overall it was pretty nice for that aspect..

My favorite bar that G. Hod used against AMEND in his battle verse..

"I'd say he had a chance. . But then, I'd have to stop and delete mine
Every punch he's done is played. . 10 bucks says he drops a "De-Feet" line"


AMEND - You threw personal punchlines with some more counted multis, then G. Hod which I appriciated seeing after I had read the whole battle verse. Although, the punchlines really did get G. Hod better than he got you, just your personals I felt affected him more, in my own opinion.. Although, some of your punchlines were a bit boring, although in the end the real creativity/originality was edged by you, though.. As for the multis, you used them enough, pretty much in the middle of both VERY good or TOO less, feel me? Enough were in there to strength the bar up.. Which leads us to structured format, this aspect of yours really was balanced and leveled each bar up into a straight line downwards, feel me? The multis filled up each length of the line nicely and it just made it an overall decent battle verse, pretty well written here, mos' definite..

My favorite bar that AMEND used against G. Hod in his battle verse..

"Quality,To Me U Lack - Generic Knock-Offs Never Leave The Rack
I Cant Believe This Cat - An RB Vet, But At Rhyme N Reason's WAK"


Rating
Vocabulary - Tie
Multis - AMEND
Complexity - Tie
Punchlines - AMEND
Creativity/Originality - Tie (Real evened out, one took it in a few lines and then the other, as well.)
Structure/Format - AMEND

Overall - Decent battle, very personal with some real nice punchlines that added to that "personal vibe." Both opponents came decent in the end, but not "great." Just remember, I'm not trying to be mean, nor rude.. I just like to keep it brutally honest, real, and I like to be able to show my love for the members of Rapbattles, mos' def..


Vote - AMEND